Comments on Aisling by David A Donovan
- I liked the idea of the story. The first paragraph was excellent. I feel though that it was a bit overdone after that, with far, far too many adjectives. The story could be made excellent with some heavy editing, I think. JS
- very lovely story, it made me cry, is this from the same writer as 'Old Ghosts?' wonder if we are related?
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