Comments on Bug Infestation by Ian Duncan Smith
- Hi Ian, I liked the off-beat nature of this story. It's a good short sharp read. I did wonder who the narrator was and several other questions came to mind. But overall I guess the reader is left with 'something' which he has now to figure out. Perhaps when after reading the story questions linger, then that can't be bad. Cleveland W. Gibson
- Well written, more info on the characters would have added to your story, but I enjoyed it.
- Hi Ian, I left a comment at the site. All in all, enjoyed the piece. You have talent. I thought the piece was strong but could have gone further. Perhaps, clarify the relationships... the characters. Powerful style, though. Good luck, Gary Alexander
- Liked the story very much, covered a lot in a little space.
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