Comments on Companion by Noah Ruderman
- Finely crafted and deeply moving, I felt very strongly for the character and was sympathetic to her constant inner struggle. Well done.
- Nicely structured. A bit too romantic of an ending paragraph for my taste. I'd rather that it was him and she either knew her life would change, either by the fact that she'd go with him OR by the fact that when she looked at him, she saw him differently. But that's just me. I liked it anyway.
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