Comments on Gravity Keeps Holding Me Down by Jerry Crews
- Jerry, I seldom read a story that makes me burst out in uncontrolled laughter. You have a marvelous sense of humor that will take you a long way in story writing. I usually read only the first paragraph of a story and if I'm not hooked I drop it. But when Mamma shot Papa I was forced to read the whole thing. Cheers... Verne Morse
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