Comments on Life's a Bitch by Moira McDermott
- I think it was a very good story but possibly could have been even better by making it longer. From M R P C
- You capture the "voice" of the narrator nicely with her wry comments on Millie & her family. I'd like to know where this is taking place & have the info on the kids when they first appear. You might consider telling the second part of the story more in scenes than narrative. A good read. Martin Green. mgreensuncity@yahoo.com
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