Comments on Real Men by Charlie Fish
- Colonel John Smith (George Peppard), “Hannibal” and The A-Team spring to mind!!! Bloody good story. Paradoxically, how many proletariat would want to become “Bang Steelballs” or “Roger Steelwank” on a weekend? – grass is always greener, etc – a means for avoiding capitalist dystopia, or escaping the wife!!!! :) Cheers, Alan
- Excellent. The writing is confident, ambitious, with a great sense of fun. It's also original. At first, I thought I'd seen the characters before in Blackadder, but the idea of subverting the real man into DIY fumbling Homer Simpsons is new and works to draw the reader through. Very good.
- Hello. I was just looking through you web site and I re-read REAL MEN. What a story! I love people's comments about it. Really fun to hear how strong they are you can almost feel the power behind them as they say it. Well done. E xxx
- Hard as fucking nails! Like dirty dozen for the EotW generation! Good stuff. Hoo Ya!!
- This was funny. Really cheesy! That's its charm, the cheese. Very well done! vulgar painting of a woman’s vagina, called "Source of Life". – LOL. Roger Steelwank – hahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaa
- Loved it, especially the examples of manhood you give at the end. "Real men scratch their fucking testicles just to make you feel awkward!" Loved it :)
- Hilarious. Angel
- I enjoyed every single word of this. This is great just on entertainment value alone. The writing is of the highest standard and the comedic timing is spot on. Thanks for a fun evening. I'll be back later just to cheer myself up.
- I think I grew some chest hair just readin it. Well told, sir. Well told. :)
- Story rocks like a whore in full swing. As hard as a brickshit house. Loved it dude, keep it up. :)
- I really liked this. The ending was great!
- LOL... this was hilarious. Love the role reversal at the end. Very creative and well-written.
- Author's comment: I wrote this story in response to a challenge on an online writers' forum. The challenge was to write a real man's story "with explosions, chase scenes, gratuitous sex, girls on trampolines, and most of all, one liners that would make Arnold proud." I really enjoyed writing it!
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