Comments on A Black Limousine, a Tangelo Tree, and a Naked Woman by John Andrew Durler
- I'm not a pro at short stories but this story just never caught my interest. I was rather lost to say the least. One time the character was putting a rope under her car and the next minute she is doing triple flips in the front yard. That lost me. I was guessing that after he saw her different body parts that his imagination began to run away with itself. Also, the story didnt pull me in to the plot and I just wasnt sure of the ending. What did having better sex with his wife have anything to do with that woman unless he was always imaging he was having sex with the character of the story.
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